Make your voice heard
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This sales brochure excerpt demonstrates the difference removing a few unnecessary words can make.

Cutting out surplus words needn’t change the meaning or the feel of your content. However, it can reduce the length – and make it more inviting to read.

Original
There are a number of different temporary accommodation options available in the region.

These include on-campus as well as off-campus options. Our Accommodation Services division aims to assist students (and staff) in finding temporary accommodation and to provide suggestions and quotations on places to stay in the local vicinity.

For a list of their services and information about temporary accommodation, please see their website: www… (65 words)

Revised
The region boasts many temporary accommodation options, both on and off campus.

Accommodation Services helps students and staff find temporary accommodation, and can provide suggestions and quotations. For services and information, please see www… (34 words)

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